WWW: - Consistency of colour and font used - Range of images taken from the film itself with captions - Strong sense of bias in language - Good use of a quote to support tone of the review
EBI: - The centrefold is not clear - make sure that the text and images fit around the centre line in the middle of the two pages - The margins around the outside of the review should be the same size all around - Text should have a small margin on either side and should not touch any column lines - The font used for the film title should be the same or similar to that used in the film and poster - they should not all be different - The large image on the left hand side should really be placed underneath the columns and the film title - The stars should be smaller in size and the film title should be much larger - Ensure that subheadings are close to the paragraphs that they are for - Film magazine name is missing - should be placed on one side at the top of the page - The film review red band at the bottom should be changed as again this seems out of place - could this be placed at the side if necessary vertically? - The recommendations box on the right hand side should be smaller and again, there should be small margins placed around the text so that it does not touch the lines around it
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Consistency of colour and font used
- Range of images taken from the film itself with captions
- Strong sense of bias in language
- Good use of a quote to support tone of the review
EBI:
- The centrefold is not clear - make sure that the text and images fit around the centre line in the middle of the two pages
- The margins around the outside of the review should be the same size all around - Text should have a small margin on either side and should not touch any column lines
- The font used for the film title should be the same or similar to that used in the film and poster - they should not all be different
- The large image on the left hand side should really be placed underneath the columns and the film title
- The stars should be smaller in size and the film title should be much larger
- Ensure that subheadings are close to the paragraphs that they are for
- Film magazine name is missing - should be placed on one side at the top of the page
- The film review red band at the bottom should be changed as again this seems out of place - could this be placed at the side if necessary vertically?
- The recommendations box on the right hand side should be smaller and again, there should be small margins placed around the text so that it does not touch the lines around it