WWW: - Good understanding of symbolism - Notes show an awareness of horror conventions
EBI: - In your first slide regarding Halloween you don't really evaluate the use of this within the original film or within your own. How is Halloween effective within the context of the film? You haven't stated how you will adapt this idea - what are you going to do differently? - In your ideas regarding the use of a mask, again you do not evaluate where you have seen this used effectively and how. You should be discussing how you will use this within your film rather than giving options - be definite and precise in your reasoning
I improved on: Getting rid of the mask idea because it will not be used and replacing it with the mirror idea. I also explained the way Halloween is effective through using the example of conventions.
WWW:
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- Notes show an awareness of horror conventions
EBI:
- In your first slide regarding Halloween you don't really evaluate the use of this within the original film or within your own. How is Halloween effective within the context of the film? You haven't stated how you will adapt this idea - what are you going to do differently?
- In your ideas regarding the use of a mask, again you do not evaluate where you have seen this used effectively and how. You should be discussing how you will use this within your film rather than giving options - be definite and precise in your reasoning
I improved on: Getting rid of the mask idea because it will not be used and replacing it with the mirror idea.
ReplyDeleteI also explained the way Halloween is effective through using the example of conventions.